"Yeasty Cock-Slimmer" wrote in message
news:c7bn401rjhnaccts0770jds6kb0tl9v0dl@rdmzrnew stxt.nz...
On Sun, 7 Mar 2004 15:03:06 -0800, "ScottW"
wrote:

Your problem is you're just as, if not more, guilty than many of the
crimes you despise.

Better Mr. grammar checker?

Er, no. That doesn't make sense at all.

Maybe this will help.

Your problem is you're just as, if not more, guilty than many
people of the crimes you despise.

or this

Your problem is you're just as guilty of the crimes you
despise as many people. You may even be more guilty.

Do you need more?

ScottW








I would go this way. Your problem is you are just as guilty, if not more so,
than the people who commit the crimes you despise.







One more change.

Your problem is you are just as guilty, if not more so,
as the people who commit the crimes you despise.