"Geoff Wood" -nospam wrote in message
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"Geoff Duncan" wrote in message
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"Peter Larsen" wrote in message
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Geoff Duncan wrote:

If you have a few minutes, I'd be interested in any constructive
feedback on
this track.

http://www.philmadsen.co.nz/download/sample_beach.mp3

Bass appears detached and lives its own life without being integrated
into the mix. More echo does not provide an illusion of a large room,
more pre-delay of it does, also at a usenet-sized glance echo appears
to
be (too)monoic.

I'd echo that. It sounds like the bass has been added on in another
time-and-space, possibly by somebody not involved in the original
perfomances....

The rest seems well integrated and balanced. Except maybe the BVs at the
very end of the sample (last 5 sec) seem a bit 'elsewhere' too.

If I were you I'd find a better room ;-)

geoff1



Thanks for the feedback Other Geoff, I agree with all of the above....

I am working on the 'better room'scenario.................

Hows it all going.....


cheers

Geoff


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