MINe 109 wrote:

In article ,
Howard Ferstler wrote:

I suppose I could go back into my draft files and paste my
original version here (as noted above, it was somewhat
different from the final, edited version that Gene Pitts put
into his magazine), but I would rather just get the my
article completed and into The Sensible Sound.

Good Lord! The print version had been edited?

Sure. Pitts edits all the articles that appear in his
magazine. I think that the version that John Atkinson got
hold of was taken from the magazine. He did not have access
to any draft. He was not only critiquing my writing style;
he was also critiquing Gene Pitts work as an editor.

Howard Ferstler